Monday, October 6, 2008

Thesis Statement
War between the humans and martians create an unstable atmosphere for both, also leading the narrator to kill the curate, the artillery man who was a devoted and impressionistic soldier became an unrealistic dreamer, and finally during all the mass herding of people trying to escape humans turn on each other for their own fight for survival.

1 comment:

komox37 said...

1) In what way is the atmosphere unstable for the Martians?
2) Mind the grammar tenses. You jump back and forth from present to past to future.

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